Voice over script

After producing the first version of the film we decided as a group to re-record the voice over because it did not come out as clear as we wanted it to. We also decided to produce a vague script of things that should be said as part of the voice over as the other one was completely improvised.

First Draft Feedback

After we presented the first draft of our product to our teacher we were given a range of changes to make and consider. These changes will improve the product and therefore improve the grade of our product.
The changes we needed to make to our product include:
- Add quiet tension music
- Change title font
- Remove the clip of daniel
- Add another street shot to increase the length of the film
- Re-record the voice over to a higher qaulity (less muffling)
- Script the voiceover
- Change the name of the film (we've decided on the title Red Herring)
- Use the face close up clip as the last shot in the sequence

Final Project First Draft